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another poem: (i wrote this one)
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another poem: (i wrote this one)
the towers may have fallen
the people may have died
but all that did was build us
as there souls lived on inside

the fire may have burned  
the hell may have raged
but all that did was build us 
as we became un-caged

the devil may have risen
the sorrow may have came
but all that did was build us
as we buried you with shame

the soldiers may have left 
the villians may have fled 
but all that did was build us
as we kicked your a$$ with blue,white,and red.

                    Mr.bishi pleeeez don't delete this because i cused.


Very, Very, VEry, very good poem charger. You have got some real talent there. You should take ur talent further then just a pool site forum. Check out this site www.poetry.com its pretty cool you'll find poems that i have written on that site. ;) Good Luck to you and keep up the great work.
wut does no one like this poem.
Very nice!!  
I have to agree with Peachy.....you do have TALENT!
I look forward to reading more!
Sad Eyes
I loved it i write poems 2.
 wut do u think of this 1:

  Each of us are floating near a water-fall
of death, each of us are floating under a river 
of HOPE, each of us are floating on a river.....
 of Life.
very good poem charger, i hope osama bin laden reads it someday and finally realizes he made the hugest mistake in history.  God bless America
Well Mr.Charger7,very nice poem. Very nice indede.

A and B the C of D
(Above and Beond the Call of Duty)
if i may ask wut state do u live in?????????
yes a lot of people think we don't but we live just like normal people do. Hey you're the first person who would chat w/me.