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A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change.
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R O S E

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A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 23, 2005 6:31 AM
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This is a poem for a player here. Hope he identifes with it. BTW hes from California.

A Lonely Man

Among optic illusions,
a lonely man crawled,
having fallen under a spell
driven by a spiritual current.

Floating on an updraft,
to where he doesn't know.
Floating higher and higher,
his immagination roaming free.

Does anybody know where he's going?
He claims that fate cheated him,
but he, himself, wove his web of existence
while leading his putrid double life.

Secrets locked deep inside him,
opened and poured vile forth
like an angry inflamed wound,
was this the end of his world?

Choosing his words carefully,
he cried out to whoever was there,
I feel shackled to loneliness,
that is what my life has always been.

The pulse in his soul struggles,
his life now changed forever,
his heart opens to goodness,
could he start over again?

Hungering for a new chance,
he now knows his destiny
he knows what direction to procede,
still can he: can he?

As he returns home,
he finds he's at peace with all,
no longer alone in this monstrous world!
He now must find himself a sense of purpose.

Rose 11-23-05




Legend™

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 23, 2005 9:53 AM
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Where did you copy and paste that from ?

bloodywatergrl

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 23, 2005 12:25 PM
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actually that was good, copied or not.

RAIN9

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 23, 2005 7:56 PM
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I really liked the imagery...it conveys a sense of the person and his feelings.

R O S E

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 24, 2005 4:34 AM
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I wrote the poem myself. I have a book of poetry published too. I can write for anyone or any occasion. Glad you all enjoyed it.
Rose


JadeKarasinski.

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 24, 2005 8:52 AM
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Really nice poem ROSE.Any chance of you doing some more here please?

Legend

You wouldnt know talent if it jumped up and punched you in the mouth.


Jade.

whiteghost3

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 25, 2005 9:41 AM
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how sweet someone wrote a poem.

lilM&M

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 25, 2005 11:57 AM
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LMAO Jade

Really nice poem...maybe you could do some more?

RAIN9

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 25, 2005 7:54 PM
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lol can you write a poem for me Rose?

R O S E

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 27, 2005 4:37 PM
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What type poem would you like? One of your name or maybe an angst?
Rose


Francesco Totti

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Re: A poem I wrote for scones. Posted: Nov 27, 2005 5:56 PM
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A scone and tea at half past three make the day a little a brighter take your cakes and fancy tarts and shove them up your sh*ter.

Scones scones they are quite smashing they also are delicious i leave in that cupboard over there right beside the dishes.

Wheres ma scone? wheres ma scone? oh here it is next to the phone.

Soz I Could Not Resist

Francesco Totti

Francesco Totti

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 27, 2005 6:14 PM
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By The Way Rose Your Poem Is Good

RAIN9

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 27, 2005 9:47 PM
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What type poem would you like? One of your name or maybe an angst?

One of my name please...ty.

JadeKarasinski.

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 28, 2005 10:17 AM
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What a load of pretentious crap,send the guy an e mail.Nobody else cares (except melodramatic teenage girls).

Well virus i guess you're entitled to your opinion same as anybody else,but before you start jumping to conclusions about the people who have posted replies about ROSE's poem,i would just like to point out that i don't consider myself to be melodramatic and i'm certainly not a teenage girl.

Just so that you know for future reference i was born on the 6th of June 1984,that makes me 21.

Not exactly a teenager is it.


Jade.

The Power

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Re: A poem I wrote for a special player who wants to change. Posted: Nov 28, 2005 10:41 AM
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nevermind suit he just a little boy with a big mouth.

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