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My first poem
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My first poem
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My first poem
The road of life

As I walk down this road, I feel as though I'm alone.
Life has many twists and turns, That's the only thing for sure.
I see people come and go, Down the road that God has chose.
Some roads are longer and tougher then others,
We just have to pull ourselves together.


This road never ends, Till you take your last breath.
And even then are you sure that's the end.
With every minute that goes by, I can't help but wonder why.
I see people smiling and enjoying life, But why can't I.


This road of life is a test, You go through it without much rest.
It gets better with time, It will always be like a chime.
Days and years go by, But memories never fade away.
 As you follow the road to see where it ends,
Maybe a better road of life is just ahead.
:(  OK , Im crying now ... very nice lone  .. :)
Great Writing LoneWolf; dont worry, ur finest hour is soon to come.
This one is just for u lone  ..  with love
My Mommy Told Me
   
On those hot summer nights , when the starts are all bright
         I know you'll be thinking of me.
         So just look up at the stars , to the ones on the right 
         Im that bright one up there you see.

         On those same summer nights, when the stars are all bright
         I'll be watching , we are not far apart .
         And i'll be saying to God , i just cant understand 
         Why you tore me and my child apart  .

  
But i know that one day , God wil say to you 
         Come child , it's time to part
         And when u arrive, i sure will be there
         With all of the love from my heart

        Now until that day comes, you must be strong
        Everything will turn out just fine.
        And I want you to know, that no matter what happened 
       I love you , and your one of a kind.
Thank you Tara :) and Thank you Chass, That is so beautiful. Brought tears to my eyes. :)
i no its very offtopic and hav a go if u want but how do u get those pictures, btw i am subscribed
great poem lone i enjoyed it you are a good friend and i wish you the best.:):)
Wonderful Poem Lone......Keep it up man.
OKKKKK people pass me the sick bucket,,,,,kiddin peachy dont get ur whatsits in a twist
Thank you all:) I'm female for those of you that don't know. lol
in that case wolf.it was a wonderful poem
Lone,  That is absolutly beautiful, you did a great job. Keep up the good work.
Wow Lonewolf,
you are talented!!

We have many talented writers here on FOD!
Hope to read more Lonewolf :)

Sad eyes
OK, I'm impressed, and that take alot. Lone and Chass, That was great. Keep it up you 2. Two classy poems from two classy people. A.P  
awww, Thank you all so much.
happy tears i hope . :)That one came from the heart ..