Dream World here i am, sittin right now lots of things to think about i got many things in mind but they seem to stay confined im scared to share it cuz when i do i cant bear it things seem to get so complicated then silence fills the room the feelings i have u know they are true sometimes just "i love you" doesn't pay proper due cuz there's so much more much more then love my vocabulary runs out tryin to express what's in my heart sometimes i wonder what it'd be like to live in a dream world where we got our wishes from life where love wasnt bound to the rules in books where there wasnt any baggage where only the purest love ruled but do these such places exist? this i dont know but i know if it did i'd be the first one to go i'd wish for wings, to fly so high anywhere i wanted, anywhere in time and then when i got there i'd forever there live happily ever after just like when we were kids.
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Foget the FlyOrDie typing Baby! You is gona be big! I can see it know, Movies! Books! Showbiz! (This goes out to every other poem writer)
*bringing out the kleenex tissue* beautiful poem fine, I don't usually care for poems, but that was touching :)
best poem i seen so far on here.. but dont want this to sound like a compliment coz its not..its still useless but not as useless as the rest :) thats the nicest thing ive ever said.
In fact, as I`ve seen to often, after that "happily ever after", for a reason or another, it comes the divorce. And just to be more painful, there are kids parted between parents. As I said, I`ve seen that to often to believe that a land like that is more than "Fata Morgana", but hey, people can dream.....!
ty everyone for ur replies, Don im glad that u actually for even half a second liked any poem, holly as always i have not the slightest idea what ur sayin im sure it wasnt too nice tho if its talkin about divorce, to tell u the truth the poem aint really bout marriage, its just about love, it came to mind so i wrote it down, thats all, for those who liked it, im glad u did :D, sorry i took a while to reply, some stuff have been goin on at home, my dad got a little sick and one of my dogs had to be taken to the vet, plz keep us in ur prayers if possible, im not much for askin for help but i'm kinda in need of it, anywayz sorry for saddening this post, im glad everyone liked the poem and hope everyone else gets to read it :). Fine
Very Good Fine, I like it :) Keep them rollin' Thinking of u and hope all is well. U know where I am if u need a chat ;)